Music Video First Draft

                      

WWW: 

• Our lip-syncing shots match up to the song
• We have a lot of establishing shots, to allow the audience to connect with where our artist is
• Most of our shots are still and in focus
• The location and costume shots represent our artist's star image to our audeince
• The genre we are trying to communicate is illustrated well in our first draft 

 EBI:

• Some of our shots are out of focus i.e. the oyster one, so we need to re-shoot that
• More shots are needed towards the end of the musi video to show our artist leaving London and to make the end of our music video a lot clearer. 

• We need to make sure we have a range of lip-sycning shots in different places throughout the whole of the music video as at the moment, our lip-syncing shots are quite long, which could get boring and repetitive.

To improve our first draft, we are going to shoot some more lip-syncing shots with a shadow on Jack's face to create different lighting techniques and to improve the aesthetics of our video. We are also going to re-shoot some London shots and take more shots of Jack, as our video at the moment consits more of establishing shots rather than of our artist.